avoid the pain right away

you love another

i love you

this is not a duo

to avoid pain

i bid you ,with love,

adieu

Reviews

[Laurierose]

Very few words though jammed-packed with much meaning. Pain is simple to avoid. We typically live our daily lives comfortably. No one seeks pain. However, pain is uncontrollable. When we learn to let go of the very source of it do we remember better times. This piece says it all. Sometimes holding on is necessary. Though it's not always the answer. Often, a huge part of love is letting go and setting free. Healing may hurt, but once we've achieved our own oneness do we look back, smile, and move forward. Very helpful. Great read.

[marilyn 1225]

agree100 percent thank you so much so appreciate your time in reviewing.. kind and accurate.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

short sweet to the point i understood this and could relate this to my life yes. very lovely little piece, thanks for entering my competition.

[marilyn 1225]

thank you so much for your kind words.,, many people around the world suffer from broken hearts so good of you to comment and to have a competition

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

i love hosting competitions as you can see i do them weekly it connects me with everyone on here on a more personal deeper note.
i feel a link between the contest entrants and myself believe me it is very hard to choose from 86 poems down to 10 prizes lol but i am in the midst of it right now i feel empathy towards all that dont win a prize but in my minds eye they all are winners if you understand

[marilyn 1225]

WE WHO ARE ALIVE AND WELL, EVEN IF NOT IN A LOVE RELATIONSHIP, ARE WINNERS, AND YOUR KIND KIND EMPATHY IS SO APPRECIATED BY ALL... THANK YOU!

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Maybe avoiding the pain just at the time it rises takes the lesser possible time to heal the heart!
Great expressed bye in few word!