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A Tattered Tatting


A Poem by Mark
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"The Fran Series": The fruit of a two-year love affair gone awry, I wrote about six of my all-time favorite poems. This is one of them.
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A TATTERED TATTING

A Doily on the table lay,
A piece of tatted Lace
Soiled, wrinkled, all askew,
Tattered, in fact, on its face

But I imagined it as it WAS,
When from the patient Hands
And mind and heart of Artisan sprang
To first 'pon table land.

Green, its borders were, and pink:
Twelve triangles bright,
Equispaced, a fair rosette,
'round finest work, pure white.

Alas!, that Time had roughly dealt
That Doily many a blow,
It's spangled dangles shrunk, a-twist,,
And soiled, but spoiled? NO!

Now I, an Artisan, it espied--
I sought but to repair
The loveliness, the Craftsmanship
I knew within was there.

With patience and gentility,
Its dangles I'd untwist,
Steaming lightly, 'til their shape
Untangled, as I'd wish'd!

Its grey, discolored yarns, I kissed
The dirt from every thread…
But then, to my astonishment,
The Doily spoke, and said,

"Take care, fair Artisan, I pray,
For though I may seem worn
Twists and knots are all I am,
For that's how Tatting's born!"

"Mayhap what you perceive as wear's
"But a single thread, untied
"So, one MORE knot, not one Knot less
"I fear you've left untried!"

"Would you consider possible
"That a Craftsman more crafty than Thee
"Has tied and twisted a thousand Knots,
"More subtly that you can see?"

"Thy Pardon, fair Doily!", this Artisan sobbed,
Raised my hands, and backed away,
"I never thought, nor did I ask
"If in this state you'd stay!"

'NO, Sir!", quoth she. "I desire NOT
"The dis-repair, or dust;
"I desire only that the Pattern's respected;
"Giv'n that, do as you must!"

Now a saddened, but wiser Artisan
Her threads, each gently tests,
Inquiring, with each loving touch,
If aught were better left.

And together, each their roles they play
The results, none may yet see,
For they trust a greater Craftsman's hands--
His patience, and gentility!


september 15, 2005

© 2009 Mark



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Author's Note

Never let it be said that no good can come of a love gone bad. In this poem, I admit that I was trying to \"fix\" her, to re-shape her, without having been asked to do so, and so learning respect and humility.
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Oh Mark....this is just exquisite! You have told such a beautiful fable with a well learned lesson included.
I love the exchanges between the Artisan and the Doiley, with all of its tatting. As the Artisan worked, and worked, and worked, it was only in the realization that the doiley was exactly as it was supposed to be that needed not to be changed. or even rearranged, that your poem became "alive".
Wonderful, just wonderful! Tatting has become somewhat of a lost art. I am glad to see that you have spoken of it in such a skillful, and entertaining way!

Posted 3 Months Ago

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