Nouns and Verbs

Nouns and Verbs

A Poem by Marquise
"

Be Great at being You

"
You are an action word 
in a room full of nouns
You are coal when 
the diamond gets rough
You're the product of the mistakes 
you've learned from
Never stop making mistakes
You are a million thoughts 
from reaching your goals
But only one action away 
from fulfilling them
Nouns the time to Verb.

© 2015 Marquise


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This poem encourages taking action and pursuing one's goals, even in the face of challenges and mistakes. The speaker emphasizes the importance of perseverance and learning from past failures, and encourages the reader to be proactive and take steps towards achieving their dreams. The poem also plays with the idea of language and grammar, using the metaphor of verbs and nouns to suggest that action is more important than mere existence.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marquise

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much!



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This poem encourages taking action and pursuing one's goals, even in the face of challenges and mistakes. The speaker emphasizes the importance of perseverance and learning from past failures, and encourages the reader to be proactive and take steps towards achieving their dreams. The poem also plays with the idea of language and grammar, using the metaphor of verbs and nouns to suggest that action is more important than mere existence.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marquise

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
Strong message, I can't ay I'm very fund of it's style unfortunately. However I'm experimental myself...it has a very witty personality.

Cheers!

Apologies for just reading it as well, it's along story, but I have not been on writers cafe as often as I used to be. You are one of 600 plus read requests I have to go through lol.

Stay creative :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW! So many meanings from the use of nouns and verbs. A clever write this is, what a delightful insightful journey , a real GEM!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fabulous piece of work!
Solid message and very well written,
creative but also uplifting and true,
going to favorites, thanks for sharing
and b-blessed!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marquise

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!! That's means alot! Especially I make it to someone's favorites!

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Added on April 17, 2015
Last Updated on April 17, 2015
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Marquise
Marquise

Philadelphia, PA



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I don't consider myself a writer because I don't write often, but I have trouble putting words together when I want to express myself verbally. Writing is the one way I can do this successfully. I lov.. more..

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