Save Me from Myself

Help me, this I pray
Lest without I die
Thy choice alone to save me
Choose not against

Shattered apart inside
This furious passion afire
Melts me away from substance
Stitch together my soul

Alone I lay and suffer
No love, nor care from another
Alone am I in this world
And none to place trust

Reach out and touch me
Grab my hand and hold
Pull me to grace
Save me from myself...

Save me

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

Woo hoo Pig , sooo eee ! Hard to review with the picture of little old ladies , hog hats ,noses, calling the hogs ! Fans like no others. I think I will read more...

[CarrieFaeFuller]

Another great read. Intense feelings just washed over me and I read it I kinda wanted to save you myself. But as E.L. said, you are never alone.

Loved it, seriously!

[joshua deathdealer]

This is awesome. I love the longing and the fact that this is a song. Great work.

[......]

I need someone to save me from myself off and on so i know the feelings. Very well expressed and well written

[Elisa Laura]

Remember here you're never alone.
I feel you on this one, deeply.

I shall not save you from yourself,
As you're here and I respect, the awareness already
More at the time you wrote this.
You're a brilliant poet/ singer song writer!!!! ♫

E.L.

[....]

WOW!! I really like this, such depth and so emotional.

[Stacey Watts]

This was very well expressed. I love the flow and the imagery in this song. The words speak of despair that so many feel even myself. The words are very haunting to me.

[justjenn_2u]

Love this. Save me from myself. Yes, I can relate to your words here and have an appreciation for showing weakness. Weakness shown just proves to be strength. Good write.

[Amata Luna]

Great! I love the way you used the words in here. The language is just enough to give me the images of loneliness and yes, despair. Save Me from Myself. A true enough title. A good enough poem for one's own greatest battle; battling yourself. You've done well and your lyrics are good, I hope I can hear its sound as I read the lines anew. ;)

[Mockingbird]

sounds like despair. however there is hope in the end in that there seems to be someone there who could save you. it would be a nice song, and an awesome one to hear on acoustic guitar.