Haiku # 11

Haiku # 11

A Poem by mattavelli
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Late August in the city

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summer is passing
the sun still heats the pavement
but the breeze is cool

© 2013 mattavelli


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Sounds like an August in my city! Nice work provided awesome imagery :)

Posted 8 Years Ago
start wearing a muffler........you wouldn't want to catch cold now, would you?

Posted 8 Years Ago
Yes, those changes are coming. Nicely summed up.

Posted 10 Years Ago
A fine haiku! See, that wasn't so hard, now was it Mike?

Posted 10 Years Ago
winter is coming
the sun still shines on snow fields
but the fire is warm

Posted 10 Years Ago


mattavelli

10 Years Ago

good. seems winter is here, if there is snow on the ground.

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LIFE IS A PARTY. DON'T BE A PINATA. ------------------- Hello, Thanks for visiting my page. I'm Matt. I enjoy reading and writing poetry. If you have a poem that you'd like me to read, please let.. more..

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