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Haiku #6

Haiku #6

A Poem by mattavelli

Dust becomes a star

Thought machines create language

I count syllables

 

© 2008 mattavelli


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beautiful haiku. well constructed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love the last line. :)
Shows personality.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice melting of two different elements to blend into a Haiku Thank you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love the way you presented creation on three levels. Great!

Sal

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great Write. Nicely Done.


Rayne

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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great writing, thanx for posting

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bravo - you did it...these can be the most elusive things but you did it - Bravo.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thinking - there 's a concept! I like this...I still don't know what a haiku is but I like it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with Gabe on this one -- you've GOT it!!! Well done and bravo! And to think you only started a few months ago ... amazing job here and what a productive journey :-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 5, 2008

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LIFE IS A PARTY. DON'T BE A PINATA. ------------------- Hello, Thanks for visiting my page. I'm Matt. I enjoy reading and writing poetry. If you have a poem that you'd like me to read, please let.. more..

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