Paper can't change

I WROTE THIS WHEN I WAS THINKING ABOUT A GIRL I LIKE, SHE LIKE ANOTHER GUY AND I HOPE THIS WILL WORK ANYONE THINK IT WILL

Nothing on paper can change what I have to say

You are beautiful in every way

This may be short but it gets to the point

 I want to be with you every second of the day.

My words are strong that's why I wrote this:

Look at me, what do you say

Ever since I laid my eyes on you I was slain

Oh wait did I mention you are beautiful in every way

Author's Note

MY FIRST POEM

Reviews

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

thanks everyone this is my first attempt at writing a poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing first poem. Great movement and purpose to your words. A young man view on love is felt in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Elizebeth Brooks]

Short, sweet, and to the point of what it is that you are feeling. You are very emotional with your writing, and that is a good thing. Keep up the good work. :-)

Raven.

[diannesam]

I love the every other line rhyming with the same sounds, very original, I don't think I've ever seen that done before. I really like the words and the meaning to it. It' really good

[Disillusioned]

I think it's beautiful, and would have loved to get it from someone who felt that way. Go for it, but prepare yourself for the possibility of rejection first, because, well, life is unfair, and reality is quite an indifferent thing. good luck