The Suicide Note

Bye Mom

I write this for you

looking out the window watching the rain

cause mom, you always knew it true

trying to forget all the pain

I can't live with it anymore

Noticing a squirrel in my tree

He treats me like a dirty w***e.

wishing to be that free.

I just want you to know

waiting too long for it to never end

that you will have to let go

hoping my soul will mend

I will never be free.....

Praying for anyone to rescue me

He promised to always find me.

knowing my end begins with this tree.

I figured out How.

Accepting my fate....

Mom, it has to be now.

Refusing to live with his hate.

 

I love you, mom.  Please forgive me.

 

Love Always,

 

Samantha

Author's Note

Dancing at the end of a short rope next to a tall tree........

Reviews

[Rosalind Gale]

As it happens, I was coming over to read you. I am enamored of this poem - though for reasons I need not go into. Sad, yes of course, and yet to me, just blank, heartless, full of heart - all those clashing moods, so hard to define -
Thank you Matthew.
-x-

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for taking the time

Matthew

[Rosalind Gale]

You are so welcome -
-x-

[Anne Korhonen]

Oh wow... Deeply touching. I'm getting chills because you write so well!

[Matthew Kult]

Well thank you for the compliment. More importantly thank you for taking the time.

Matthew

[DIVYA]

A very troubled spirit, I read in these lines. I pray there is light at the other side. A very moving poem.

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you very much

Matthew

[Jessica Harmony]

I love this. I'm pretty sure, if i'm reading it right, there are two letters here, and the second one is slightly hidden. I really like the way you wrote this, great imagery and i can feel what the writer of the note was feeling.. great poem :)

[Cassie316]

This is good, and would have controlled my emotions except for these two lines:
"Noticing a squirrel in my tree
He treats me like a dirty w***e."
cuz then for a moment I thought it was funny cuz it sounded like the squirrel treats samantha like a dirty w***e...
maybe I'm the only one who noticed that... but if I'm not you might wanna seriously re think pairing those lines together. Otherwise you would have held and controlled my emotion with this poem, and I would have liked it more.

[Breanna Ragland]

its great... i love it a lot and this really speaks to my soul... and helps me remember that my friend is in a better place now and had a good reason for going... like i said before... a wonderful write and i love it alot.

[My Fair Lady]

Everytime I read you I am just speechless. You truly are a shock poet- and I a shock poet follower appearantly because I just keep coming back... knowing it's going to get me every time! Again- you leave me in awe of you and your talent my friend. How I love Matthew Kult.

Love, M'Lady

[nothing]

Another good one.

Sarah..

[Cassiopia Summers]

Again I review, I remember this write. I read it awhile back and it touched me even then. It has a great flow about it, even with the two conversations. Wonderful.

[Doreen]

Another that cuts right to the soul, leaving its mark. Such a sad write, but you write it so well.