Madness

Madness

A Poem by Matthew Kult
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Review given to Selene's Red Beryl Vows

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Shall I be your end,

 a thought that runs its course?

 or shall I make us the beginning?

 Will you be my victim,

 my cherished prize.

Or will you enter into a world

created by obsession.

 A world of pure madness....

or madness that has created this world.

 Will you lust for me,

 desire me.

Hurt me.

Shall I be your Angel,

with a tender touch and loving caress...

will you accept me?

 Allow me to travel down

the unseen path of purity.

 Will you lust for the desire?

 Obsess over the possibilities.

Will you find us a w***e....

to cherish.

Dress her like a doll.

Lust for her.

Shall I show her the attention you want?

Tease you.

Please her

 while you watch me

 with your eyes

 fixated upon the purity

 of madness.

 Will you stare

 into her eyes

 as the cord

 tightens.

Shall I stare into yours

 as the thrill

 quickens your heart,

 arouses you.

 Will you desire me,

 please me.

Taunt me

for having her.

Will you leave

 a rose

 on her chest...

an offering of love....

remorse....

madness...


© 2017 Matthew Kult



Author's Note

Matthew Kult
Madness is contagious.

Inspired by Selene's ~Red Beryl Vows~

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madness is how will create in our mind and how to satisfy it is the mystery. Its a turn on to see your mate lust someone else you desire as you watch. Patience is the key in a situation like that but not all can handle that haha really loved reading it, you are very creative and love how you put it together for all to read :)

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Matthew Kult

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Thank you very much for the lovely words

Matthew
Nancy2Write4You

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you welcome hun



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Hi Matthew ... this sounds like it is straight form the heart ... as in more that a poetic response. And yet I know how Selene's poetry can be. She is such an enigma. You surely have sown the threads of madness madness here. You work well with the emotions ... poetically speaking.

PS. Yes, I am a lover of all things "Corvid." Raven, a dear friend having seen me through thick and thin. Another name ... Lady Ravenspirit.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now why can't I come up with a demented story from someone else's work. This one, I have to admit, made me shiver. It was very deep in it's deviant tone and in a sexually alluring way. I like to look at these things from afar and you put me right into the action. I'm still cringing, though I think it's one of your best. I'm glad Selene inspired you.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Madness...aren't we all...

There is darkness, passion here, a mocking,
taunting plot. Of playing with obsession by the
fine hairs.

Shall I be your angel you ask...but of course, you come
in many forms...

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Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark and exciting...good write
Peace
Robin

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Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As always, you manage to excite while you disturb. Never a dull read. Captivating (no pun... Oh hell, pun was intended!) and lyrical. There's always a disconnect in your works. They are beautiful, but you don't want to like them since they are always a bit (and sometimes more than a bit) depraved. Great job of taking me away from the doldrums (Not Red Beryl Vows, as that was anything but dull)

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Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

honestly, madness is contagious. I liked what you've written here. The flow is just pure awesome. I'm sorry I talk like that.
Anyway, this was darker than dark and it did what it was supposed to do: portray madness. Great job! Keep writing!
-Yin

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Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

how beautifully in darkly bent you've bounced your serrated steel from my wounded canvas~ drawing a brand new bruise across the landscape of the darker little things that scurry through our hindbrains~

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