Madness

Review given to Selene's Red Beryl Vows

Shall I be your end,

 a thought that runs its course?

 or shall I make us the beginning?

 Will you be my victim,

 my cherished prize.

Or will you enter into a world

created by obsession.

 A world of pure madness....

or madness that has created this world.

 Will you lust for me,

 desire me.

Hurt me.

Shall I be your Angel,

with a tender touch and loving caress...

will you accept me?

 Allow me to travel down

the unseen path of purity.

 Will you lust for the desire?

 Obsess over the possibilities.

Will you find us a w***e....

to cherish.

Dress her like a doll.

Lust for her.

Shall I show her the attention you want?

Tease you.

Please her

 while you watch me

 with your gaze

 fixated upon the purity

 of madness.

 Will you stare

 into her eyes

 as the cord

 tightens.

Shall I stare into yours

 as the thrill

 quickens your heart,

 arouses you.

 Will you desire me,

 please me.

Taunt me

for having her.

Will you leave

 a rose

 on her chest...

an offering of love....

remorse....

madness...

Author's Note

Madness is contagious.

Inspired by Selene's ~Red Beryl Vows~

Reviews

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

oh wow, oh wow, Dearest, love it,
I like it because it is madness and twisted lust
the relish of love, but affection to a "w***e"
where the purity lingers in a doll, a "w***e"
fun to read, great write! p.s. join my group, Erotica, will invite, ----Maynard

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping in. I will check it out.

Matthew

[1809 Black Plague December]

most welcome, Dearest, :P

[Fran Marie]

Like s mad rush ..each verse tumbling into the next with a wild passion... a most captivatinng read..nice work

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you Fran

Matthew

[Smoking Man]

Very inspiring piece of poetry which makes me think of my own poem "The Madness In Me".
Voices in my head perhaps are not merely multiple personality disorder but the muse which shouts from within.
A million.unheard souls screaming out to be heard.
Yes I can say for sure this poem touched my soul.
Kudos to you Matt

[Matthew Kult]

You are too kind.

Thank you.

Matthew

[Smoking Man]

Nonsense,I'm only reviewing what I read and it is indeed inspiring Matt

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and amazing use of words and thoughts. I liked the hardness and the twist of the words. The more I read. The more I wanted to read more. A perfect ending to the poem. I liked the questions in the poem. Love can lead us to madness. Thank you Matthew for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you much

Matthew

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Matthew.

[Mockingbird]

this is a great example of writing with total abandon; no inhibition, no taboo, only about desire and sexual complicity. very lyrical as well. great job.

[Don Shaw]

Very intense !

[Doreen]

Ooooo I like this one. I like the flow and the imagery very much. Love the way it just...oozes and gushes. Very well done.

[Raven]

Hi Matthew ... this sounds like it is straight form the heart ... as in more that a poetic response. And yet I know how Selene's poetry can be. She is such an enigma. You surely have sown the threads of madness madness here. You work well with the emotions ... poetically speaking.

PS. Yes, I am a lover of all things "Corvid." Raven, a dear friend having seen me through thick and thin. Another name ... Lady Ravenspirit.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Now why can't I come up with a demented story from someone else's work. This one, I have to admit, made me shiver. It was very deep in it's deviant tone and in a sexually alluring way. I like to look at these things from afar and you put me right into the action. I'm still cringing, though I think it's one of your best. I'm glad Selene inspired you.

[Amy Bumpas]

Madness...aren't we all...

There is darkness, passion here, a mocking,
taunting plot. Of playing with obsession by the
fine hairs.

Shall I be your angel you ask...but of course, you come
in many forms...

[luciddreamer]

Dark and exciting...good write
Peace
Robin