Eternity Shared

A moment shared with love

A perfect scene from a dream

filled with sweat and screams.
The scent from a rose covered
desire. As your body begs for
the release of an
ever growing fire.
I taste every
inch of you, teasing
convincingly, pleasing seductivly
As our lips finally meet.
Lost in a world all our own.
Dancing to a rhythmic beat.
And in this moment, time is ours.
A nibble on your lip
as I slowly slip to feed from
your womb as a moan
escapes from the
pleasures your mind finds from
the ecstacy, the thrill that goes beyond
simple trust and complicated lust.
Minds and hearts quicken
Each breath becomes
shallow and fast.
Begging for this time to forever last.
You scream for the heavens
as the stars explode into
an awaiting nirvana of
pleasurable kisses.
Fulfilling all those lost
wishes.
Every inch of our bodies
longing for the deeper release
while our pulses increase
Holding each other close
through every dancing
note our bodies sing.
Finding ourselves in
something much more
than a simple fling.
Within a moment
where it will always be
You and me
in eternity

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

These days alas I don’t live by passion in the sheets but
I do recall several or maybe more times in my life seems like another person not me
These days I find passion in my hobbies and dark rich chocolate lol occasional
Thanks for a very descriptive cleanly erotic write

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping by.

Matthew

[S. Elice]

Elegantly written with amazing imagery! I wish I could write like this because that was perfectly stunning.

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you much

Matthew

[Ardra]

Within a moment
where it will always be
You and me
in eternity


I mean this poem left me speechless...it's just perfect...

Loved it ...And the pic is also very appealing to the poem

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you kindly

Matthew

[DIVYA]

A very passionate and sensual write, it has great flow and turns on the heat so effectively. Yet whats even more special about this poem is that its not just about the physical.

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for your kind words

Matthew

[DIVYA]

You are most welcome!

[SJ Mullins]

Sensual, erotic, and wonderful imagery. Definitely a nice change from the dark pieces, although I like them as well. I have other friends who write dark poetry. You do it just as well as they, although I do hope to see more seductive pieces like this. You wrote it so beautifully. Who knew you had this side to you. :) Surprise! Surprise! A nice one at that! Well done!

[Matthew Kult]

Much Appreciated

Matthew

[SJ Mullins]

You're welcome! :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Very sensual and seductive.. filled with all the ingredients for love 'making'


Nicely penned

[Tina Kline]

This is very erotic and romantic at the same time. A moment of love shared, blissful too! Outstanding job on this piece, I love it!

[Doreen]

Good evening, Matt. This is heavenly and sensual and written in such a poetically beautiful way. Very well done.

[Lovely Lady]

What do you mean dark and sinister?... this is just as lovely as.... ummmm... ME!
do it again!

[ang]

This poem is a different direction for you. I like the change from the guesome/scary movie scene writting.
This is very sensual and totally sets the mood for some romancing. its hot!

[edie madison]

this is unusual for you! no blood or scary stuff! haha. anyways, i really liked this. you have a gift for description. beautiful job! (: