Lonlieness

left again 
to lie 
and die
to try
and cry
to wait 
and hate
to sleep
and weep

again in lonliness
i watch the time pass
i lie in the grass
and wait
and wait
and wait
but as i wait
i feel like bait
for despair
like im tearing out my hair
like im starting to burn
like i cannot turn
like no matter what i try
i still just cry

and as iv done so often before
i sit and wait
behind a closed door
i would open it if i had a key
but there is no key to open me

Author's Note

i didnt feel like capitalizing the is. please tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Harley (arbiter)]

Nice I can really relate man. Awesom. I love when I can relate. The pain the sorrow. I'm weird and people think I need help but that's just it. Help don't help. Keep writing man. Awesom write

[Alex Crow]

It open a door to depression and puts it into words. Excellent

[AmandaPanda]

This brings out depression in me. It feels like you are alone in the world and feeling trapped by everyday things. It seems like life is suffocating you, squeezing the air out of your lungs. There is a key out there for you. You just got to wait and see where life takes ya.