Monster

The monster
Causing everyone near it to weep
Causing nothing but despair
Everyone feels only fear
Whenever the monster is near
It reaps havoc for all to see
You are the victim
The monster is me

Reviews

[Green]

This one really makes you think. At first I wondered what you were describing and then as I read on (and by that I mean when I read the last line), I realized what you were describing (of course if I hadn't we would have some bigger problems). What made me think about it though is that, I've definitely felt like I'm just destroying everything and everyone I touch before and it, to put it in a language I understand, sucks when you realize what you're doing to everyone around you. You expressed those feelings so well and you did in such a short poem that I'm pretty impressed.

[New Dawn]

I was intrigued by the title - clever little write - says much more than is actually written, good twist at the end

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

great , short but descriptive , i like it ...

[once upon a time]

Thanks that means a lot

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

welcome ^____*

[Anna]

I love the story and the development of the monster. It says more between the lines than the actual poem its self.

[once upon a time]

Thank you I'm glad you liked it!