Kittens

Kittens rolling in a ball.
Kittens climbing up the wall.
Kittens jumping up and down.
Kittens jumping all around.
Kittens slowing down a bit.
Kittens still won't sit.
Kittens running really fast,
but their energy won't last.
Kittens on me, purring deeply.
Kittens on me, kinda sleepy.

Reviews

[LittleMissSunshine :)]

This is ridiculously young, naive, and sweet. Yet it obviously has a talented author behind it :) you, like me have much room to mature as a poet. And remember, that poetry isn't always just about finding words that rhyme.
Best of wishes in your writing,

[Irvette Dauphine]

cute :3
i like this.. :D

[Khaled Hishma]

you are creative and can write about anything when you face a challenge...you should have this song-poem for children books get its copyrights,and you should consider writing such as this especially for children,it seem you have the beauty of a child in you. good luck

[MoriartyMesa]

LOL cute.

[WickedPenWielder]

adorable...and so true, I can't seem to tame the wild beast in my house, terrorizing all. It is 5lbs of furry fury and razor claws...my daughters baby, half demon, lovable kitten Binkx. Cute 100/100

[afra]

awwwwwwww this is sooooo cute

[bursting colors]

sooo cute

[babygirlz]

this is exactly like my little kitten

[SeventhSin]

Cute! lol But kittens can be crazy. Cool little poem :)

[Jordan A. Wilson]

funny little poem