Once More

Always in me

Take my hand and show me Darling ...

A place on the end of the rainbow .

Kiss my lips and tell me Darling ...

The Ninth cloud we've seen before .

Guide me through the milky way ,

To reach The Sun , The Moon and The Stars above ...

Once more ... I want you to be mine ...

Just once more ! 

Reviews

[Ana B.]

Beautiful, endearing piece of romance :) Lovely writing

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Ana B :-)

[TheLostMind]

This is really cute. I love the honest flow of words here.. right from your heart.. sweet and tender.. Good Job :)

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you TheLostMind , I appreciate you checking it out

[armin]

tender and adorable piece of poetry.

Guide me through the milky way ,To reach The Sun , The Moon and The Stars

I liked that phrase.
Well done.

armin. ...

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Armin , glad you think so

[Nyanachi]

It glistens! This one is filled with such beautiful imagery. I love the elements you put in of the milky way, stars, and sun. Its a truly heavenly love.

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you JELLYCAT :-)

[spoken vine]

Now I miss someone,this is an amazing imaginative piece.Good job

[Saravanan Evu]

Loved it, nice one. Keep writing!

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Saravanan Evu

[Gee]

Just once more,and then to be left wanting for ever more...nice Mary

[Mary Bradley]

Funny! Gee :-) ... how about once more to stay this time ? :-) ... grand idea wouldn't it ?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if only we could have that once more...often we lose our loves for various reasons...and we regret and savor that last time so much we just want one more taste of that love.

[Mary Bradley]

Exactly ! :-) ... thank you for checking it out Jacob Erin - Gilberto . Have a good day .

[Christopher Casper]

This is a tender and vulnerable write. It is uplifting and filled with wonder. :)

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Christopher Casper , I appreciate your kind words ... yes I feel that vulnerable writing it :-)

[Tasfia Islam]

this is so adorable... :)

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Annabelle :-) ...I appreciate you checking it out

[Gerry Legister]

this is warm adorable and tender

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Gerry Legister :-)