My Little Sister

Feb 22. 2015 For you Wik

Face as pretty as a doll,

As she used to pout at everything in sight.

She had love in abundance,

Not one hath given her strength.

Look forward my little sister 

Look at those Golden doors.

Go on now... His love for you won't ever fail.

Take His hand and let Him guide you,

Through the Golden doors and beyond.

Go ahead ... shed all your worldliness which made you pout.

I want you to know ...

We'll sing our love for you forever

As He provides eternal happiness,

As He lights your darkness,

And as He soothes your worry lines.

Away you go my little sister...through the Heaven Golden doors.

Don't ever be afraid no more .

Reviews

[spoken vine]

Pure emotion,I feel like I know how you felt pouring that out.it is a beautiful piece tribute to a beautiful soul.

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Spoken Vine

[wordman]

a beautiful tribute to your sister vik and I know she can feel your love
god needed a special rose,and it was your sister that he chose

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you wordman , I appreciate it

[wordman]

you are welcome,

[AaronFreitas]

Man this piece made me sad Mary.... I am so sorry for your loss my friend. What a beautiful piece that you poured emotion into. Good job

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Aaron Freitas

[~]

This poem breaks my heart. I am really sorry for your loss. May I ask you what happened? But if it is too much, I understand. I liked your strong attitude. Yes, she will not be afraid anymore. Holding His hand she will be happy. Love and hugs!

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Moonskittles , I appreciate it . My younger sister died of hemorrhage after birthing her second daughter . It's hard to believe that she's gone forever and she was only 26 years of age . Her pregnancies was high risk ones , since her body having difficulty to adjust to being pregnant .

[~]

Ohhh.. Bless her soul! Still she went with it. A powerful woman indeed.

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you very much Moonskittles

[Renvek]

Wow,
So sorry for your loss, I can feel your love for her in this poem. Please understand I don't normally read poetry and to have 2 poems that touch my heart is quite an accomplishment. My prayers for you and your family.
Renvek -- Aka Alan

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Alan , I appreciate it . Speedy and painless recovery for Renvek

[Nyanachi]

A beautiful poem. I liked the symbolic "Golden Doors" they are a nice touch to it.

[Mary Bradley]

Thanks again JELLYCAT

[Anita Singh]

Beautiful! I don't have words to express. So very sad and touching..

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Anita Singh

[Sami Khalil]

So sorry for the loss. This was so touching.............

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Semi Khalil I appreciate it

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......

[Mary Bradley]

So sorry I misspelt your name Sami Khalil ... my auto correct is at fault :-)

[Sami Khalil]

:)............

[ANTO]

Its truly beautiful and moving Mary. It must have been hard to pen this and so soul-lifting at the same time as you felt her near. God Bless
Thank you

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Anto , yes it was hard ... still is . I guess death is a lot harder on us the living than the dead .
I hope you're feeling better now Anto :-) from whatever 'ailments' you go through . GBU as well :-)

[ANTO]

Im fine thank you Mary - yes those left behind have so much pain.
:)

[Gee]

Hi Mary,this is so,so sad.My heart goes out to you and all of your family and friends.

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you so much Gee ... I hope over time we'd lessen the pain .