Light

blind me

and

save

me...

Author's Note

A five word poem.

Reviews

[John Ryan]

the fact that this is so simple yet says so much is a testament to your gifts as a writer

keep it up and continue

[Liberty Likes]

Every word is perfect! ^v^

[Maia]

thankyou dear :)

[Cid]

Blind me n kiss me
Kiss me n love me
Love me n hug me
hug me n cuddle me
cuddle me n hear me
hear me n listen to me x2
....
O' yeah!
Love me n love me
am baby loving me
just just love me
get off if you hurt me
get off if you hate me
get off if you use me
get off if you tease me
if you baby tease me cheat on me n use me
I'll kick you outta my door, baby
cause I love you n I want you to love me x2
.........
Yeah! Love's you and life is me!
When we both go blind
The world's on our knee!
....
Na Na Na Na Na Na Naaaaaaaaaaaaa x2
Ye ye yea yeah ye ye yea yeahhhhhhh x2

Baby!
Blind me n save me
love me n feel me!

This's a song that comes from your pretty cool 5 words poem. I loved your this poem so, I thought to make some smile on your beautiful face so, I wrote one song for you that's eventually generated from your poem. Thanks for reading n loving the song!

I love your poem! Keep on!

[Maia]

That did put a smile on my face! Thankyou!

I'm definitely gonna be singing this fabulous song you've written for me in the shower. Without a doubt.

[Cid]

The pleasure's always mine to put some smiles on the angel's faces. Am glad to have your smiles. Ha! You now make some smiles on my face either! :)
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Yeah, yeah, please, i've even written that song for you so, yeah, please sing that song and make that song more beautiful with your scent and of course, with your sweet birdy voice to let the people know that "Maia" is on fire :)
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Thank you dear friend, am honored to have your kind words!

[Shirlena]

...and it packs a PUNCH too. Often times the fewer the words the more profound. This actually gave me chills, "Blind me and save me"? This is one for the poets poet. I am so intrigued there are so many ways you can go with this thought...If I don't see injustice I can be spared of pain for others, in myself...thus live freed. That is truth.

[Maia]

Thankyou so much. I'm glad you found it thought provoking... that was my goal. A very interesting, thoughtful, and deep interpretation of it too!

[Shirlena]

Ur welcomed and thanks :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Blind me and save me,blind me from the world maybe and save me from my own demise hehe something like that? hehe way too many ideas that this can lead to hehe Thanks for sharing hehe for it was really enjoyable! :)

[Maia]

I'm very flattered, thankyou :) another wonderful interpretation

[Vandana Sharma]

so much said in just 5 words:)

[Maia]

Less is more.