Fading Remembrance

Fading Remembrance

A Poem by Nightfeather
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I can not escape forever, for I must close the gap between the one I love. I don't want my memories of her distort but can I meet my love outside my memories?

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Fading Remembrance


I wonder where my tears have gone…
Did they also fade in my darkness?
Can I still love you until the end of Aeon…?

Why is there a hole, instead of my heart?
My love has leaked again, hasn't it…?
Maybe it was time for our fates to split,
But I refuse, for I still believe that you are the one!

Told myself a lie again, for the love was one sided…
But even now, I still thrive for our reconnection.
We may have been distanced to difference states,
But I will fold our paper fate and bring you closer to me.
For our linked existence, was meant to be.

I want to love you outside my fading remembrance,
But I can’t even remember your voice…
Why am I still chasing a ghost of the past?
I don’t even know how long my heart will last…

Should I be moving ‘past’?
You are so much better than I, 
Is it better for both of us if I just die…?
Dying is not an option, for I have chosen to outlast!

I will never let you fall again!
Back then, I may have faltered…
But now, my way of living has altered.
This time, things are different,
The question is not how long, but when!
I have been bathing far too long in my absence...


©Mitchell Samuël Gordon



© 2015 Nightfeather



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Nightfeather
I do not own this image: http://damaimikaz.deviantart.com/art/False-Awakening-516424126

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I know you send me read request for other poems, but this is my favorite piece of poetry. I just love it, reminds of a character I made and I imagine that this is how she feels and now I feel all emotional! AHH!!!!
Thank you for writing this, it is amazing!

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Nightfeather

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Thank you for your kind and awesome words :)



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This is a magical piece, great job!

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Nightfeather

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I know you send me read request for other poems, but this is my favorite piece of poetry. I just love it, reminds of a character I made and I imagine that this is how she feels and now I feel all emotional! AHH!!!!
Thank you for writing this, it is amazing!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind and awesome words :)
I love this, beautiful work of art. :)

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Nightfeather

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)
i love this piece eternal darkness! ooh!

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Nightfeather

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Nice dark words of your creation. Make me to write something more. Keep writing too.

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Nightfeather

2 Years Ago

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2 Years Ago

Great keep it up and never give up
~ Impressive poetry here that is not short on rhyme, metaphor or talent. ~

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Nightfeather

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words. I will stay true to my writing :)

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Nightfeather

Amsterdam, North-Holland, Netherlands



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