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life repeats

life repeats

A Poem by Siliousneo

I met a girl who seemed so fly


so i taught her how to drive


we fell in love and planned a kid


they almost died on his birth bed


it was love that saved our family


three months later she conceived our daughter


so we moved away from all the drama


I lost my job and things got rough


she even moved back to her ma's


then she gave birth to our girl Shiloh


who was born with some real heart problems


we got engaged and planned a great wedding


only to have her friends rune everything


so i have lost my life my love and my family....

© 2012 Siliousneo

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A lot of trauma packed into your words, and your write expresses so much…it's really intense and powerful.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Wow. very traumatic and powerful..

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Added on October 12, 2012
Last Updated on October 12, 2012



Williams, MN

Im a father of four with a history most people judge me the wrong way simply cause of my past all im trying to do is get by hope you like what i have to put down here as they are things ive felt over .. more..