life repeats

life repeats

A Poem by Siliousneo

I met a girl who seemed so fly

 

so i taught her how to drive

 

we fell in love and planned a kid

 

they almost died on his birth bed

 

it was love that saved our family

 

three months later she conceived our daughter

 

so we moved away from all the drama

 

I lost my job and things got rough

 

she even moved back to her ma's

 

then she gave birth to our girl Shiloh

 

who was born with some real heart problems

 

we got engaged and planned a great wedding

 

only to have her friends rune everything

 

so i have lost my life my love and my family....


© 2012 Siliousneo



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A lot of trauma packed into your words, and your write expresses so much…it's really intense and powerful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow. very traumatic and powerful..

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Siliousneo
Siliousneo

Williams, MN



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Im a father of four with a history most people judge me the wrong way simply cause of my past all im trying to do is get by hope you like what i have to put down here as they are things ive felt over .. more..

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