Depressing Awakening

Depressing Awakening

A Poem by Siliousneo

i lay beside you lost in my dream
you lay beside me cuddling
i wake up happy from blissful dreams
then realise it was all fantasy
there was no kids or wedding ring
there was no house or kitty
there was only u lying next to me
my arms wrapped around you cuddling
no baby in belly no ring on hand
just you and me trying to work things out
why do dreams have to be so depressing

© 2012 Siliousneo



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This was interesting for me...because the flow and words made me feel calm, and relaxed...yet the word "depressing" just reversed all of those feelings. not in a bad way. I liked it. it shows how everyone reads something differently, at times, and especially it can be totally different for the writer. I liked reading it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Nicely written.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Acer

4 Years Ago

Thanks you've described it, because i was just trying to ask you that from where you'd got that idea.. read more
Siliousneo

4 Years Ago

np =) part of the dream has come true =) we have a kid on the way =) only we are not together anymor.. read more
Acer

4 Years Ago

yeah...you'll. You should have to write something more about it, i'd really like to read them all.
Dreams are an unconsious way to warn you something is wrong. They will never harm u but warn u. Very heart-felt piece well done :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Acer

4 Years Ago

I agree with you.

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Added on October 18, 2012
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Siliousneo
Siliousneo

Williams, MN



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Im a father of four with a history most people judge me the wrong way simply cause of my past all im trying to do is get by hope you like what i have to put down here as they are things ive felt over .. more..

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