i should have known

i should have known

A Poem by Siliousneo

i shoulda known you were like the rest
i shoulda known youd rip my heart from my chest
i shoulda known wed have a kid
i shoulda known that we would end
i shoulda known id be alone
but somehow i know id pull through
and now i know my true love would come through
shes helped me with all your broken promises
shes healed my heart and left it soothed
she loves me like she did back in highschool
i shoulda known its always been her and not you


© 2013 Siliousneo



Author's Note

Siliousneo
this is a poem of my feelings as of late and of the truth ive come to relise after my recent ex decided to keep me out of our soon to be kids life

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This one is very good. Excellent job

Posted 4 Years Ago


again great with opening your chest and letting your heart out.
also again I note the cadence in the piece. Throw a couple hooks in and you could have a song :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


I can feel the hurt and pain in this good poem. Be strong my friend for things will change for the better...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow…my mind is blown and I can't find words that are good enough to describe the brillance of this piece. Very heartfelt, cheerful at the end, and relatable (especially the beginning). Tres magnifique, mon amie :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Siliousneo

4 Years Ago

thank you =) im glad you like it. its not very often i write things as im always critisizing myself .. read more
Silhouette

4 Years Ago

=P your writing does not suck, silly lol it's really good. Also, you are welcome =D

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Siliousneo
Siliousneo

Williams, MN



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Im a father of four with a history most people judge me the wrong way simply cause of my past all im trying to do is get by hope you like what i have to put down here as they are things ive felt over .. more..

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