wishing

wishing

A Poem by Siliousneo

Wishing you were here with me
Wishing all the tears would cease
Wishing that my life was great
Wishing i wasn't on repeat

They've come they've gone
They've gone abroad
They've torn my heart
They've left me unsorted

My lifes been short
And full of sorrow
My lifes been hell
And full of caring
My lifes been bad
And full of lessons

Wishing you were here with me
Wishing we were cuddling
Wishing we were still together
Wishing id quit dreaming this dream i am dreaming



© 2013 Siliousneo



Author's Note

Siliousneo
my life is one of hard knocks as i have 4 children and a fifth do now any day
there are 3 baby mamas but only one truly holds my heart. I seem to repeat myself over and again falling in love and having children, im hoping one day to settle down and raise my family

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nice piece. I like the flow. GJ

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is a very touching piece... You have a wonderful talent, my dear friend! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


As I read this, my heart twisted violently in my chest. I cold really feel the pain and longing in your words and I hope you get your wish someday. Great write, as always :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


In life you go through many changes.... some lessons in life can be very challenging.
Who knows what tomorrow brings..keep your head up and you might be surprised.

PS: Enjoyed it :-)



Posted 4 Years Ago



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Siliousneo
Siliousneo

Williams, MN



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Im a father of four with a history most people judge me the wrong way simply cause of my past all im trying to do is get by hope you like what i have to put down here as they are things ive felt over .. more..

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