soon to be family

soon to be family

A Poem by Siliousneo
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thoughts

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my baby mama likes her drama
shes kept our baby from my family
she tells people shes doing good
but at night she still cuts like its cool
lil Elijah so cute and cuddly
will soon be with a stable family
as the social workers promise i will get atleast joint custody
her family will finally see that im not what she claims me to be
and that i am the safer bet for his future you see
i dont live off the state or those i can leech from
i work hard and pay for everything
its sad this state gives women everything
even if they are known for acts of violence
thats ok though i will get through this
and our son will grow up with values
and know that mom chose to deprive him
of what my family can provide for him
and all those who watch and see
will see im the guy who fought for him

© 2013 Siliousneo



Author's Note

Siliousneo
my ex is keeping my son from me but not for long i had to get this off my chest

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wow this is so powerful and it's true women get everything when it comes to the kids even if they don't deserve it. insane. Stay strong dude.

Posted 4 Years Ago


We live in stereotyped world where, everything is biased towards the common perception.Nobody has time to explore the truth and yes, the pain you are growing through after knowing what you have been through is very well expressed through this poem.
All I can say you have faith in yourself and you can turn things around. People let go only things which they feel deep within "They don't deserve".

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Siliousneo
Siliousneo

Williams, MN



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Im a father of four with a history most people judge me the wrong way simply cause of my past all im trying to do is get by hope you like what i have to put down here as they are things ive felt over .. more..

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