How to fall in love

Step 1

Look into his eyes

His eyes are sky blue and draw you in like a sun rise 

So bright and beautiful that you don't realize the sun rise will become a sun set

You sit and watch

Each moment your heart collides with your muted mind

The sun rise turns into gray clouds 

You fall back

The sun set is clear in his eyes

Darker darker darker 

The sun has died out like the innocence you thought you locked up

In your mind the key was a ring and name change

But in the real world sun rises become sun sets

The key was his hand 

Coiled up and ready to strike if you set off an alarm

Sky blue

Bruise blue

Black skies

Black eyes

Step 2

Don't 

Do not under any circumstances fall in love 

Sun sets and black skies hide behind clouds 

You are too young to see this

Go back to bed

Hold bunny and give Rover a kiss

There will be a sun rise when you wake up

Don't look into his eyes

Reviews

[Kronus]

The introduction. The final lines. Fantastic. A work of art. Petrifying and incredible. The center, however, needs more substance. More of a gradient rather than a sudden jolt. That is what may need to happen in my eyes.