Or

This one is for Petlovers.

Who need a baby?

When we can have a puppy

 

Instead of having a baby

I would love to have more than one puppy

 

Why not puppy?

Why must baby?

 

Ok, you have baby

And I have puppy

 

Let's see who could be happy

You with the baby or me with the puppy

Reviews

[Kirasoul]

A very simple poem that pacts a lot of meaning. I especially love the choppy-short sentences that sound almost as if I were speaking to an innocent child.
A minor error: in the fourth sentence you use a numeral digit which interferes with the reader's fluency (in my point of you) I would always choose the direct word over numeral.
Great work Meitha, and keep it up :)

[MeithaSoekotjo]

Wow, what an advice! I was a little not confidence writing that numeral digit, so you just giving me a big help, Kirasoul! Thanks! I'll edit it after this. Thanks for letting me know that you enjoyed the poem. And for your support too! Lovely!

[Kirasoul]

I'm happy to hear that :) One more grammar mistake I might have missed last time was the last line "Let see" should be "Let's see", as in "Let us see". Happy writing!

[MeithaSoekotjo]

Aaah yaaa... I have thought something has happened around that line...but couldn't find it! Lol. Thank you so much for your good eyes :) Now, I feel more than just "happy" for writing! Really a blessing. Have a good day there!

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Very short and simple.

An interesting idea......a baby or a puppy? Quite the conundrum!
Personally, why not have both? As an animal lover, the more puppies the better for me! Give me five or six any day!
Nice work!

[MeithaSoekotjo]

Why not have both..? Hoho, I have both!
This poem was made with a thought/concern for population, economic problems, education problems...those many life problems. Most of people I know, they have baby because they "produce" the baby, in fact there're lots of baby without parents out there. And problems (life problems) usually come after they have the baby. Then the baby will be in some condition (direct/indirectly) because of the problem. But puppy...they come to a family from adoption. These 2 different background give different result. Sorry, I can talk on and on about this. Btw, it's good knowing you want more puppies better. I hope I could give you one, at least, someday ;) Thank you for your encouraging review! I am happy, that you enjoyed the poem. Cheers for the puppies!