99 Bottles

99 Bottles

A Poem by melz1108
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This is one of my first. Well one of the first that I shared, I worte in a english class when I was 13/14 yrs. old and the english teacher had us read our work in front of the class. It's about my dad

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99 bottles of beer in the fridge

99 bottles of beer

He takes some out passes out 69 bottles

Of beer in the fridge what he didn't realize 

He was destroying our family

 

69 bottles of beer in the fridge

69 bottles of beer

He takes some out passes out 49 of bottles

Of beer in the fridge So we kicked him out and

He said he'd never drink again

 

49 bottles of beer in the fridge

49 bottles of beer

He takes more out passes out 29 bottles

Of beer in the fridge we finally left him

We finally left Him, But

 

29 bottles of beer in the fridge

29 bottles of beer

He takes more out passes out 0 bottles

beer in the fridge with nothing left to give

He lied for the very last time.

 

He was destroying our family

He said he'd never drink again

We finally left him, But

He lied for the very last time

He was jus living on borrowed time

© 2010 melz1108


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Added on November 11, 2010
Last Updated on November 11, 2010

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melz1108
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I love to write about my emotions though I am not skilled at it, yet. Our moments try to define us they sneak into our souls and take over; once they succeed, they take over our lives. Our struggl.. more..

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