wow i just hit somebody with my car

A Poem by abby.

just got this in my head. gotta get it out!

wow i just hit somenbody with my car. Thump Thump was the sound it made. i really hope this guys ok. but i think im just gonna keep driving anyway.

when i hit him i heard a huge grunt. it kinda made me laugh, in a sick way. but you know what? there is nothing funny about running people over. Just kidding!

Ahahaha i hit him. i better drive fast the cops are on to me.

© 2009 abby.

hahaha like i said. gotta get it out!

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LeeLee Ryder

Hit hit bang bang... I stabbed someone, ran away and I've been on the CUTTING edge ever since....
Just kidding ... NOT REALLY... Actually, I got hit once and I grunted as I fell unconscious ...
luckily I could walk after a few months of hovering over my feet ... I looked like a grannie... HeeHee..
All kidding aside .. wicked thoughts are fun tools to write with... YOU'VE INSPIRED ME to write
about the above IMAGINARY stabbing.
Thanks for sharing... Fun stuff ....
Lee (hit-tee) Lee

Posted 3 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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LeeLee Ryder

Posted 3 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saturn's Lover

Made me laugh. It's messed up, but so funny. Love the whole attitude of it.

Posted 3 Months Ago

Nicole

Lol. I love your writing..hahaha.
I'm cracking up right now, and my teacher's like..
"Are you okay?"

Posted 3 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittney

Abby that was hilarious!

Posted 4 Months Ago

Lady Awena

The beginning was surprisingly funny. Poetry comes from unexpected places, but I believe that when you write something sick, go all the way sick. Maybe a poem about a person that has the urge to compulisvely run people over? That would be different. I think you need to lose the line "running people over isn't fun, Just Kidding!" Its confusing. However, thank you for the fresh, interesting poem
Awena

Posted 4 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

devoe

This poem is sick. I don't know why i like it. I even read it twice XD

Posted 4 Months Ago

Blake<3

haha wow.abs,this is great!:D

Posted 4 Months Ago

Courtney Elizabeth

lmao wow abby ur amazing. tht poem is hi-laroi-ous!!!! teheehheh love ya!

Posted 4 Months Ago

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Added on November 5, 2009
Last Updated on November 5, 2009

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abby.

Madison, ME

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i'm evil. hahaha just kidding. kind of. i think that you'll find i'm quite confusing. just ask my friends. i like kitties. a lot. i don't usually write, but i always have good ideas and never have a c.. [more]