deep love

just thought it would be an interesting topic. slightly overdone, (like steak hahaha,) but interesting nontheless.

I'm looking in his window. Nobody is as beautiful. I'm cutting all my losses. Waiting for my heart to be cured. He said he needed space, that we weren't meant for each other, but how can he be so sure?

We were so in love. Until he met another. He stopped calling all together, didn't even bother. Now I'm putting this gun to my head, Nothing ever gets better. Sticks and stones may break my bones, but deep love is forever.

Author's Note

hee hee..

Reviews

[Amanda Carls]

Guys are jerks! LOL
Not all but most. Its gonna be hard the find the one because
there is always going to be something, something wrong or in the way.
I know this by experience, my family, and my friends.
Have you ever met someone in a relationship who doesn't have problems? Cuz if they don't then they don't have a good relationship. I know it sounds wrong but its true! If you want to know more, just ask! :D

But I used to be the same about looking for the one. Always looking for someone to love me. Now, Im just living to live! And you can't expect someone to love you if you can't love yourself. You should work on it.

If you don't like something about yourself just work on it. Learn to love yourself, just don't become too self-absorbed and don't forget who you are and those around you.

I don't know you, but you're probably a great person whos just lost - confused.
And when you write - your writings are great, but when you writing, try just thinking from your heart - just let the words flow even if it doesn't always make sense because sometimes the best things don't make sense! Good Luck!

And thanks for your entries!! :D

[Emily?]

Abbs this is too amazing! Love it wayyyy too much gurl! Rufus Job!!!=)

[Nicole]

Very good.
i enjoyed it, as well as the last lines.
"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but deep love is forever."
Love it. xDD

[Kayla_May]

=] that was good but don't kill your self!!

[Dream Catcher]

I really love this, I can relate so much to it. Its always a good write when you put real situations or feelings into your writing, but I really love this one. Good job. :)

[Brittney]

that is like the best thing ever!

oh..... my gosh abby....... i friggin love it

[Jmartins]

WOW!!!

[Blake<3]

woah.