Eyes Of A Monster

Eyes Of A Monster

A Poem by KittyVenus

I looked in his cold dark eyes and saw his soul freeze like Antarctica,
His heart like a war of Sparta,
Hate filled,
Mischief grilled
In his eyes like a frozen lake,
Cold like a snow flake.

© 2014 KittyVenus



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KittyVenus
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I like this. The relations you have attempted to make haven't exactly failed, but you need to work on them a bit.

Posted 2 Years Ago


KittyVenus

2 Years Ago

Thanks Simran... I shall attempt to correct it in the near/far future

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A Poem by KittyVenus