in you

in your eye's
i see my soul
in your kiss
i find bliss
in your heart
i find reprieve
in your words
i find hope
in you
i build a fantasy

Reviews

[J.P. Bristow]

This is sweet...like waking up in tangled sheets.

[Leah Everett]

Damn. This is so true in my case, I can really relate to it.
Well done! It's fantastic (:

[Ninja10]

short sweet to the point, well built

[Bard Constantine]

Very nice... I like how the last line puts it all in doubt... is it real, or just in the mind?

[CROSS QUARTRMANI]

Interesting poem I enjoyed it thoroughly. Keep writing your great.

[nono]

In you is whoever you are. Just let it show. If people don't like it. All I can say is it's there lost. People are cruel, but you know what to be one of those people who aren't is rare. So all I can say is keep it up!

[KaySea]

amazing

[Joshua Donahue]

very sweet. however, i found it was a bit too short for my liking. nevertheless, quality wins over quantity. a very nice piece, especially if it were to be placed on a Hallmark card or such.

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

it's very sweet ^^ and better than my writeing!!!!! X) but ant way i think u should keep writeing~~~~ ^^

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

I LOVE this. The emotion is clear and there is a confidence in the words. Very very good.