Looking for soul

digging into the cold earth

looking for my lost soul

deeper and deeper I go 

shoveling memories and scars

day and night I search

finding a trace here and there

but in the end 

nothings left but a hollow hole

Author's Note

Something I wrote real quick a few weeks ago. I didn't like it to much but I decided to put it up anyway. Tell me what you think.

Reviews

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I like this...soul searching..it's touching.

[Lilly]

I do like this. It is powerful in its simplicity. A very nice write.

[Ninja10]

not bad... speeks to you

[AlieahRose]

IM GLAD YOU PUT THIS UP...
IT'S VERY DEEP...
HOW CAN YOU NOT LIKE IT...???...
THIS WAS GREAT...
THANKS FOR SHARING...

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i really like this...

I think in its simplicity it speaks for a lot of people.