Waiting On A Train (Waking Up)

A song/poem inspired by that uber-epic film, "Inception". Enjoy!!

Waiting On A Train (Waking Up) (Inspired by the movie "Inception)

I see the face

So beautiful, who loved me so

And I'm scared to let her go

For everything I've done

I see the place

Like solace so far away

And I'm calling for them to stay

So I can make it home

So I'm gonna take this final chance

To finally set things right

And I won't ever give in or back down

No I won't give up the fight

And is this real or am I dreaming?

'Cause I can't tell truth from lies

Though I see the top perpetually spinning

And the world opens before my eyes

I'm waiting on a train

That'll take me anywhere

Is it you that I really see?

'Cause I can't feel the ground

I'm waking up again

Though I'm still here somewhere

Is this my reality?

But I hear a distant sound

And through dreams and reality I'm walking on

To somewhere I can call home

So now you know

About everything I tried to hide

All the secrets buried deep inside

Of my long-forbidden past

Watch the world unfold

Though I'm miles into the sky

And I'll do my best to try

Try to make this moment last

I'm waiting on a train

That'll take me anywhere

Is it you that I really see?

'Cause I can't feel the ground

I'm waking up again

Though I'm still here somewhere

Is this my reality?

But I hear a distant sound

And through dreams and reality I'm walking on

To somewhere I can call home

I look into your eyes, so wide and forlorn

And I'm so sorry for what I've done

But still I know, I need to let you go

'Cause you're one of the things time's left behind

Through fire, ice, lightning and the rain

Yet I know none of those will heal my pain

But still I know, I gotta let you go

'Cause you're just a memory in my mind

I'm waiting on a train

That'll take me anywhere

Is it you that I really see?

'Cause I can't feel the ground

I'm waking up again

Though I'm still here somewhere

Is this my reality?

But I hear a distant sound

And through dreams and reality I'm walking on

To somewhere I can call home

CODA

Now I've reached my destination

As the plane lands finally

A new life, new aspirations

All opened up to me

And I know I've finally made it

Is this fake or is this true

But still, that doesn't change it

Change that I'm home with you

Author's Note

Image taken from Wikipedia
This song is written from Dominic "Dom" Cobb's perspective.
First stanza: refers to the image of Cobb's wife, Mal, who is haunting his mind
Second stanza: refers to Cobb's children. Cobb sees them in his mind often as well, but every time he tries to call out to them, they hear Mal's voice and move in that direction...
Third stanza: Saito, a Japanese businessman, offers Cobb an opportunity to clear his name by implanting a thought (hence the title) in the mind of his rival to break up his father's empire...
Fourth stanza: The "top perpetually spinning" is how Cobb tells the real world from dreams. Only in the dream world does the top spin perpetually...
Chorus: The first two lines are paraphrased from the movie. Cobb often says, as well as his wife, just before they die in dreams and wake up, "You're waiting for a train. It'll take you anywhere...but you can't be sure..."
Sixth stanza: One of Cobb's team members, Ariadne, enters Cobb's dreams and discovers the truth about him. ("You" refers to her)
Seventh stanza: "Though I'm miles into the sky": Cobb and his team conduct the operation on a long-distance flight
Ninth and tenth stanzas: Cobb actually knew inception could be done because he did it to Mal, hence the "I'm so sorry" part. Mal makes him choose whether to go back to the real world or stay with her, but he chooses the real world. And as for the "fire, ice, lightning and the rain" part, anyone who watched this flick knows how epic those were...
Coda: In the end, Cobb wakes up on the plane, and Saito makes a call, that effectively cancels the charges pressed against Cobb. He finally reunites with his children, the "you" referring to them. He spins his top, and though it wobbles, it remains upright, so we don't know if he's still dreaming or not...
Darn, I feel like I ruined the surprise. lolol

Reviews

[Senseless whatever]

Awesome write. Very visual and loaded with feelings.

[Ruth]

Oh, I so want to see that film! lol Was only about it yesterday lol
AWESOME poem love!
You have cleverly pieced the scenes together, there is also a surreal element to this, intriguing!
xx

[Frantzuu]

Awesome write, I even wrote a poem based on that concept myself, great song!!!

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I think this is beautiful. I have yet to see the movie, but your song combined with a friend's recommendation certainly makes me want to see it that much more. The movie aside, your song is a stand alone beautiful piece of art. It reads very smooth and moves through the senses as a river through the wood.

Linda Marie

[Taylor H.]

I loved this poem!! I also loved the movie! Its my new favorite movie and this is my new favorite poem! Great job!

[Cheyenne]

Im going to read this as soo as i see the movie. I like to understand things about movies before i read them

[Jessica]

Good job :D This is really good.

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

very good

[.]

"All opened up to me
And I know I've finally made it
Is this fake or is this true
But still, that doesn't change it
Change that I'm home with you"

great write--
every verse reads so well-
so much sharp imagery--
great take here-I Love This!!!

james:-)

[Blue tailed kite]

Wow.... you did an awesome job of translating the movie into words... i just watched the movie yesterday and this poem made me see all the scenes so vividly....Amazing work!!!