Without You

I can’t stop remembering your eyes that spoke the words your lips could not,
I can’t forget how you made my stomach feel as if it was tied into a knot.
The sun once shined and my skies were once blue,
but since you left, my life has been dreadful without you.
My world has faded to gray, my red heart has turned black,
you promised me you’d stay, but you left and never came back.
Now the memories we shared haunt me like a ghost,
I guess this is what happens when you’re the one who cares the most.

Reviews

[Utkarsh Singh]

very well written ........luvd it ....

[Mia C.]

Thank you!!! :))

[Sami Khalil]

"since you left, my life has been dreadful without you.
My world has faded to gray, my red heart has turned black,
you promised me you’d stay, but you left and never came back.
Now the memories we shared haunt me like a ghost,"

I guess part of life and love...Well penned and conveyed...:)..............

[Mia C.]

Thank you so much!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).............

[Darkgirl]

how very beautifully sad, love it! *thumbs up*

[Mia C.]

Thank you!! :))