He lost himself when he found you

So beautiful and intelegent

Yes

intelegent indeed

your not just a girl

no

not just a girl at all

for you

you are

not this

nor that

your hard

to classify

but one thing

you know best

is to make men

belive what they

want to belive

for he didn't know that

for he wasnt a man

he was a boy

not ready

for your games

he wasn't ready

for the heart ache

he just wanted

to love you

and to be loved back

for that was the least

you could do

I always hated you

the way you looked

and talked

like you were everything

in the world

But don't you see

I know who you are now

that one word

which defines you

who you are

and always will be

to him

who lost himself

when he found you

you my darling

are a liar

and you

sweetheart

do not deserve

someone like him

Reviews

[Vanessa Rico]

I could feel your anguish in this poem of a boy that you liked being with someone that was not right for him! Great job for making me feel your emotions!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Oh oh sounds like jealously has raised his hoary head! this is to say the least a mean poem but it is a well written poem and one which reveals the persona's protective nature for when it comes to defending a loved one there are really no rules and you have shown the persona's feeling very vividly!