Our story

Our story

A Poem by micayla4

it's a symphony

loud and clear

an epiphany

shows up

of you and me

and now we are dancing

it is beautiful

the way we move

so incredible

i love the way

you touch my hair

and then you whisper to me

"I love you"

always have always will

its inevitable

and i'm scared of the way

you make me feel

so free

and my mind so clear

and i wonder

if you now understand

my obsession

my constant need

to be rescued

by you

because we

are running out of time

but this song keeps

going on

and we keep moving non stop

swaying and just

getting lost

pretending that we

 never lost

the thing that kept us

so in love

and intangled with eachother

we see

this is just a dream

of you and me

my own fantasy

 


© 2011 micayla4



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was it just a dream?? If so...these can be the most painful dreams ever. But our God keeps us moving though sometimes we jus feel like being immobile. Jus remember, despite whatevr, God has someone for you...for us. The pains tht we may experience will only cause us to love the one He has designed for us even more intensely. (it may evenr make us a bit more cautions bt tht can be good once we leave things in His hands.

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was it just a dream?? If so...these can be the most painful dreams ever. But our God keeps us moving though sometimes we jus feel like being immobile. Jus remember, despite whatevr, God has someone for you...for us. The pains tht we may experience will only cause us to love the one He has designed for us even more intensely. (it may evenr make us a bit more cautions bt tht can be good once we leave things in His hands.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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This is sweet! I love it

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lovely! But...It was just a dream... T.T
Anyway, great and well written... :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


I loved it too. Terrific writing!
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 1 Year Ago


Love it, fantasy or not! Love the romance. Great writing :)

Posted 1 Year Ago



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micayla4
micayla4

Latina, Italy



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First off, I am Christian and I believe Jesus is my savior. one of my favorite verses in the bible is matthew 5:9 "Blessed are the peacemakers, they shall be called children of God" Na.. more..

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