sunshine

feelings I have been having,

sunshine,

change in weather

leaves me cold

cold and slow

each tree a hangman,

lost soul

haunted soul,

the graves bare

without flowers

flowers,

poems written 

to make the sunshine

Author's Note

Feelings I have been having about all the changes.

Reviews

[Raven Lightner]

So... sadly I'm about a year late in favoriting/posting comments. ^^; I kinda forgot I had an account here... ^^;

But... I understand completely the use of sunshine instead of clouded sunshine. Besides, changing it would through off the rest of the poem, especially the ending.
Loved it. Write more pleeease :D

The rating is 98 because there's always room for improvement. :)

[kevluvtory]

I agree with the other comment made earlier ...Perhaps the first line could be expanded possibly to Clouded sunshine or Sunshine clouded, to depict better the use of the change to colder climes.

[John Fakler]

Interesting idea I'm not sure if the beginning makes much sense due to sunshine normally being associated with warmth other than that great job