DECISIONS...

DECISIONS...

A Poem by micky

-DECISIONS...
I watch you all
Slowly one by one fall
They say the worst things in life come free
But darling there is NO worse than me
Trust me, my price is a hefty one
But you can't take back what's been done
You'll have know where else to go
And the punishment will be slow
Maybe forever, but you probable deserve it
Or maybe I tricked you, that I will admit 
But part is your fault, I just lay the trap
It is your decision to follow the map
Witch lay in front of you 
So after it all, it was about what you chose to do
But if you do prefer to blame someone it might as well 
Be me after all you do call my home hell
But I don't see it that way for I 
Never put out a guest list, so don't bother to ask me why
For my name is Death and you will have respect
For this is my home where I protect
you... After all it was the decisions you made, which got you here 
Now you will live in FEAR...

© 2014 micky


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This write is absolutely beautiful....I thoroughly enjoyed and loved reading every line.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The levels of intensity Micky . This is ardous. Relationships are an ever evolving journey no matter who, no matter what. You seem to have encountered a challenging moment and have had to stop and contemplated what the alternatives were. I sensed frustration I did not however sensed a violent anger through the words. The subject is what makes is so intense as you took the process of death to a side that I am not used to. I always have it as a great reminder, and innevitable if you like but your came out scary.

Disturbing feeling Micky but certainly conveyed.

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


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In line 18 I meant to say "so don't bother to ask me why" please excuse my error :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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