I ran,

I ran,

A Poem by micky
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https://youtu.be/Em7vc8NWUNY

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The wet ground benieth my cold feet
Ruining away from my destiny 
Ruining from a fate I choose not to meet
Ruining from reality 
I can take the scraps and bruises 
I can take this intense cold 
Its just the woods,Life on the other hand just abuses...
Life's dark grasps grab hold...
Ruining was always easy 
That was the difference 
Between you and me 
I always needed you're assistance 
And now your gone
And im scared
Its been so long
Since my emotions have flared 
Its been so long since I felt anything 
Other than your love,and security
I felt safe by your side,I would often cling
I feel so alone being here with just me 
So now that you gone,I ran
I ran because i cnt keep up without you 
Im still breathing but im not sure how much longer i can
Im ruining but ill never find you,all we been through.. 
I reach the end,there a cliff
Im scared but I miss my brother,my best friend 
My body stiff 
Is this really my end?

© 2016 micky


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micky
https://youtu.be/Em7vc8NWUNY

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Brilliantly done....I always love these kind of concept...Every line has been created from a very deep thought and it speaks of true feelings....I really felt it my frnd....As a reader i was deeply connected with this poem.....Very very well done.....Full rating.....

Note: i think the spelling of 'beneith' will be 'beneath' my frnd.....

Posted 8 Years Ago


micky

8 Years Ago

Firstly thank you so very much for the amazing review,your words are too kind,secondly i cnt spell i.. read more

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Added on January 11, 2016
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