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My hands shake

My hands shake

A Poem by micky

My mind is a complex maze
Filled with monsters and a reply of each bad memory
Everything is in a blurry haze 
I wish it as differently

I spend my night out running my nightmares
Waking with a cold sweat and a pulsing heartache
Spending my day avoiding there blank stares
Hiding my hands that tend to shake 

Hiding the fears within my dark soul
Im nothing more than shattered pieces on the floor 
This gaping whole..
in my chest,Ill never be more 

Ill always just be this broken girl...lost 
Leaving behind broken bridges 
That Iv'e already crossed 
No point in sewing new stitches

Coz Ill never have enough thread 
To broken to care 
Im practically already dead   
As my life goes by in a blare 

And my hands they always shake 
Reminding me im unsteady 
Reminding me of every mistake 
And my heart can't take this weight,its just to heavy 
   

© 2016 micky



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Wow, beautifully written, besides some grammatical errors. Still, I've felt like this for a long time. Did you peer into my soul and memories? Lol. Only difference is I'm a dude. Very heartfelt and melancholic piece this be. Very good job. *Slow Clap*

Posted 1 Year Ago


micky

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much :)
I like this poem very much. i like how dark it is and how well written it is. i also like how it flows smoothly and is like a dam breaking a letting loose waves of emotion that was kept inside.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wow! I love discovering new talent to read, and there's brilliance here.
Love the flow and rhyme stirred in dark and raw emotion uncluttered by overthought.

Um, I'll be back to read more writing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


dark sad and very personal.........
it is difficult to find the light in all of darkness...........maybe its okay to let go....to fall............don't know waiting for a confirmation myself......i'll let you know....
till then go on......
beautiful.....
i loved it!!!
:)
p.s. why the silly spelling mistakes?

Posted 2 Years Ago


micky

2 Years Ago

thank your for the kind words friend,lol because I can't spell in genral
This left a mark somewhere really deep inside.. Very well written!

Posted 2 Years Ago


micky

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for ur review
Wow Micky, there is a line that sold me, i guess the reason for the title, the line "Hiding my hands that tend to shake" that is when i went from reading to feeling, nicely done, i have missed reading you, hope all is well

Mark Edward

Posted 2 Years Ago


micky

2 Years Ago

Thank you Mark for the kind review,kind regards friend
A nice write Micky! dark brooding personal off the cuff from the heart!

Posted 2 Years Ago


micky

2 Years Ago

Than you Andrew for the review I really appreciate it :)
sometimes we find the capability to reach down into the depths of ourselves and pull out exactly what is plaguing us. you have done this so well in this poem, and in a way many will be able to relate to. very personal write..

Posted 2 Years Ago


micky

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the kind review
Wow. This is very deep! This poem is beautiful and I encourage you to keep writing. It could be published someday and it is also very relatable.

Posted 2 Years Ago


micky

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words
Honest and direct thoughts in the poetry.
"And my hands they always shake
Reminding me im unsteady
Reminding me of every mistake
And my heart can't take this weight,its just to heavy "
Hard to hold stress and disappointment. Unsteady mind can be wiser in the proper decisions of living. Thank you Micky for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


micky

2 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.

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