alone

trying and failing to express feeling i had while trying to sleep

have you ever just felt so alone

felt that know one understands you

that know one cares whether you live or die

its just you, sat in the cold

have you ever just longed to have someone

someone who knows you

who you can trust

who might love you

how I long just to have someone to hold.

I sit here, wishing for that rare fairy tail moment

for that magical first kiss

for that impossible happily ever after

how I would love just to lye there

hand in had

gazing into each others eyes

just lie there and let this violent cruel world melt away

there is nothing but us

smiling finally happy

refusing to believe that we would ever leave that moment

its only a dream.

But why cant it come true?

I just don't wont to be alone any moor

Reviews

[James Paulin]

At times it seems that being alone is overwhelming even if we are surrounded with people. Depression can cause this feeling as one slips into an inner perspective. This poem describes the emotions felt with loneliness that can best be offset by reaching out to give the very thing you seek. Nice poetry.

[Jane Doe]

It is true your right weather it`s purburity or hormones
no one cares no one loves people like us we r bothers pests burrdens to ourfamily
then one day just one ur love(mine hasn`t came) will come along and as i break an get broken i will hopefully relize that maybe just maybe there is someone out there but not yet sadly

[Manda]

awww this was so sad! i hope everything works out...this brought tears to my eyes. i absolutely loved it!

[Michael X]

and the emotional aspect is amazing, carries a powerful meloncholy ambience, when wishes becomes dreams, and daydreams become a release of heart. loved it.

[Ama May Cooper]

A true and simple encasement of a heartless world in which we are all somewhat locked in a struglng reality.
We are after all human born into a world alone, and even tho we seek comfort it is sadly reality that even with people around we are singularity creatures, without packs . We live and die alone