Persistence produces success

not what you think it is :-)

Persistence produces success

 

Get really good at something

Do it all the time

Yeah

 

Never let anyone or anything

Stop you from doing it

Yeah

 

Smoking

Sniffing

Drinking

 

Peeping

Whoring

Pimping

 

Cheating

Lying

Stealing

 

Yeah

Don’t stop

You’re getting really good

 

Almost there

Just a bit

More

.

.

.

.

.

.

 

Congratulations,

You're a failure

Reviews

[Siobhan MacIntyre]

I don't agree with Frances that this was judgmental (no offense, Frances!). It is very thought-provoking: Consider what you are becoming before you perfect what you are doing. If only more poeple would do that.

A very creative way of getting your point across.

[Bee]

haha. makes you think. its creative! (=

[Frances Lennon]

Well, at least good at something! An interesting poem. A little judgemental but you certainly express your view here. Well done.