my perfect day

my perfect day was today  of days

the day i spent with you 

we strolled to the river with out a shiver 

but the wind blew and blew 

we shared a kiss it was full of bliss

from the heart of me to you 

 we hold each other in arm to arm 

to later find out were through but from that day 

i found you are the one for me so 

i believe that chance should come  

and me and you to bee as one 

Author's Note

review pleaseeee

Reviews

[paradise]

I like it very well written good poem

[Dove]

This is very sweet and I like it.

[roy mccarthy]

i like it,
a little on the yeats side,or keats,
nice and rhymey.....
good poem!