A Child's Army

A Child's Army

A Poem by Mind Racer
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Even the monsters don't mess with this army.

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Heavy eyes, tired limbs

She sleeps among an army of teddy bears

Nothing more than old cloth and cotton

To this girl they are special

This army is alive and strong

Her army is the bravest

These bears are here for her

The closet is empty, under the bed is clean

No monsters will come tonight

There is no need for fear this night

She sleeps soundly knowing

Her bears will keep away the evil 

© 2014 Mind Racer


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I cherished the very innocence of this poem
Thank you!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mind Racer

10 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend!
Abby, this is fantastic! I loved the imagery and message you have conveyed here.

// Her army is the bravest
These bears are here for her
The closet is empty, under the bed is clean
No monsters will come tonight //

Loved these lines!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mind Racer

10 Years Ago

Thank You!
This army is alive and strong
Her army is the bravest
nicely done, great imagination with footing on reality of a kid's thinking pattern, enjoyed

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mind Racer

10 Years Ago

Thank You! Happy to know you enjoyed it!
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

You welcome, take care
Very nice and well written...Pen on....:)..................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mind Racer

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the encouragement!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:).....................

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Added on February 8, 2014
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Tags: teddy bears, mind racer, poetry, children, sleep, safe, army

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Hey! My name is Abby. I love to write. It makes me feel happy. Relieves me that others can know the thoughts that flow through my fingers. Please review my stories so I can improve. I love criticism, .. more..

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