Give Me a Clue

I need to fight the demons, give me a clue.

Give me a clue

I’ll take anything but no

I’ve got to go soon

So, give me a clue

 

My body is strong

But, the sun is getting low

No time to waste

Please, give me a clue

 

Lives are at stake

I need the truth before the beast below

The demons are coming

Just, give me a clue

 

They are at the door

Oh God! Just let me know,

Why they are here

Give me a damn clue!

 

Heart turning black

Missing is my needed hero

Death is coming soon

Unless you give me a clue

 

My body is tired

Happiness left so long ago

My enemies have won

Should have given me clue…

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

My body is tired
Happiness left so long ago
My enemies have won
Should have given me clue…

Great write , really liked it, sincere and powerful plea to make this life worth before permanent sleep, if I use imagination God may say, son/daughter, calm your mind, look at the nature, follow the nature, and just ride in your boat

[Mind Racer]

Thank You for the advice!

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, take care

[Stefanie Holmes]

You are quite creative! I loved it! A powerful piece... talking about demons we all face and desperately would like a 'clue' on how to conquer them.
Well done!

~Stefanie

[Mind Racer]

Thank you so much

[CMPurrett]

This is definitely dark, but powerful. Well, written!

[Mind Racer]

Thank You!

[s y e]

Wow, this is dark, powerful and sad all at the same time. You had me on the edge of my seat. This is definitely dark but you need to try and look for the sun shining at the end of the dark tunnel, you'll get there.

[Mind Racer]

Don't worry, just has been a long day! Thanks for the review!

[Sami Khalil]

"Heart turning black

Missing is my needed hero

Death is coming soon

Unless you give me a clue"

We do need those clues to wipe away our blues and to rightly choose...Bravo

[Mind Racer]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................