Believe

It goes on forever

Flies planes,  swims oceans

It carrys mountains upon its back

Plants ideas to grow and reach in the future

It's your fate your destiny

It will take you any where if you believe

 

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

It's your fate your destiny
It will take you any where if you believe

I do believe. I like your style. I like the way you paint pictures with words. Great job!

[Carole]

Belief and faith is so important in our lives, MW! Just had that conversation with someone today. Doubt and unbelief really is our enemy. A very thought provoking write you have here! :-)

[Silver_Moon]

simple yet suggestive... I WILL BELIEVE... I BELIEVE... :D

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

Some ideas about Destiny. Question: Will your belief negate the work of this divine principle? Should I say, if you doubt, if you care not, if you hate, if you are in unbelief, will not this divine mandate lead you on regardless? Perhaps it will craft you a way out of your unbelief? Perhaps it will, through your unbelief, bring faith? Perhaps Destiny has strength in itself to do the work for you when you can not do it yourself? Mmmm.

And is destiny immutable, inevitable, unchangeable? Are our lives irrevocably planned? As if they were cogs in a cosmic watchclock universe, the God the Deists claim as their own? Or is there something more to life - that ineffable quality - that, while you may in truth follow your heart and destiny - the spirit of life within you goes and yearns were it will, sometimes in utter contradiction to the fate destiny planned? After all, as Bon Jovi sing, 'Its my life and like Frankie (frank sinatra) said I did it my way'. What will be your choice in this eternal life ahead? Will you go with the smooth flow of the mellow waters of destinies love? Or will the pride and vengeance for a life of glory within come to the surface and challenge all who would oppose? Sayeth I, Sayeth I, Sayeth I


MMMMMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmm?

[Gandré]

I truly liked your idea of fate, telling such a lyrical poem in this brevity in edges of mastery, and I liked this
It goes on forever

Flies planes, swims oceans

It carrys mountains upon its back ------wonderful, my style, my girl ! ha ha . be well. gandr�


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Hello there, thanks a lot for your taking time and reading my newest triple Senryu poem "Stripped of armor"... Ok you asked what soma is: in Hinduism it is an intoxicating drink prepared from a plant and used in Vedic ritual, believed to be the drink of the gods.

[Tuff Stuff]

BELIEVE! BELIEVE! BELIEVE!
I WIll BELIEVE!

[lots fo love ♥]

that is so cool. im gonna belive