How does a Star Wish?

do you know about a hearts dream?

"A shame you don't have a shooting star to wish upon now isn't it."

"Aye. But how can a star wish upon it's self for it can't wish upon another"

 

You all look up to the sky

Some to wonder

and some to wish

 

A shooting star appear on the horizon

And every wonder turns into a wish

 

But what can I do

In an hour of need

For how does a star place a hearts dream upon ones self?

 

You may think there is no up nor no down,

That we simple float around

 

You have the burdon of carrying your thinks

But we have the burdon of carrying the hearts dreams

 

"I don't know how does one star place a wish upon ones self?"

"I guess you'll never see, for there is no need"

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

UMMMMMMMMMMM?

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

think you've done a really impressive job. i love the whole theme about this question, it's something we've never really thought of.

"You may think there is no up nor no down,
That we simple float around

You have the burdon of carrying your thinks
But we have the burdon of carrying the hearts dream"
love those words

[Bella-Marie]

My favourite part of this was the start and the end. I really liked how you tied them together, that was genious.
I also love the third stanza. It was pretty :)
All in all, this was a very pretty poem. It was! Seriously. I enjoyed it immensley.