Afraid

Afraid

A Poem by babyblue
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I wrote it when i was 14 when i had a crush on a Friend,and i really had some strong feelings for this guy,but i knew if i let my heart out i would probably lose my friendship so that what the poem talks about

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Afraid

by Ivonne Lizarraga

Afraid to tell you how I really feel about you. Afraid to tell other about my feeling to-wards you.Afraid to say that I love you.Afraid to make to make a move. Afraid to even love you.

 

Yet I'm afraid to lose you as i lost others  by letting my heart too much.some times I  just wish I could tell you how i really feel . How i really love you. How i really need you.

 

Yet inside I'm real afraid to lose a good thing.Afraid that good thing will turn into a bad thing.Afraid you will abundant me for letting my heart out to you,because you probably won't be  able to handle knowing the fact that I have strong feelings for you.

 

I really don't want to lose this friendship between us. Even thou i wish we could be more then just Friends.

Yet I'd rather be your Friend the nothing at all.That's why I'm so afraid to tell you how I feel.

© 2008 babyblue


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Fix your spacing after ever comma and period in these lines (and capitalize your i's)---

wards you.Afraid to say that I love you.Afraid to make to make a move. Afraid to even

Yet I'm afraid to lose you as i lost others by letting my heart too much.some times I just wish I could tell you how i really feel . How i really love you. How i really need you.
Yet inside I'm real afraid to lose a good thing.Afraid that good thing will turn into a bad thing.Afraid you will abundant me for letting my heart out to you,because you probably

I really don't want to lose this friendship between us. Even thou i wish we could be more

Yet I'd rather be your Friend the nothing at all.That's why I'm so afraid to tell you how I

Posted 14 Years Ago



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El paso, TX



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Hey my names ivonne i'm 19 I wirte stores,and poems i go to college . I like scremo,punk,and classic rock bands such as bob marley bob dylan underoath,sliverstian,misfits,daed kenadys,the door,and t.. more..

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