My love is like a dove

 

My love is like a dove

By Ivonne L.

 

My love is like a dove flying in the sky. Flying so high, Flying so free, and wild, with the wind on my side.

Flying so high, happy, and free my love is like a dove flying high in the sky without, worries, promises, or commitments. Just flying with the wind to find its true path or its true home.

For whatever it is I’m looking for. I’m looking for it patiently. While the wind is on my side. While my love flies like a dove in the sky.

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Reviews

[Taylor H]

This would have been sooooo much better if I didnt feel like you kept repeating everything you said. I felt like I was just reading everything over and over and over again...

[Lunar Pup]

I really like this poem its imagery is amazing and its flow is really good. It is also a very happy and care free poem which is a good thing. Great piece

[Helena]

So beautiful. The imagery in this was superb and I felt I was flying with a dove!
Yvonne, please check out the contest again, my mistake I should have made it
clearer.....(I have since corrected it) but you need to put the given phrase to be
eligible for an award.


If you don't wish to alter this lovely poem in anyway I will understand, but here
is the phrase if you could somehow include it to be considered. Thank you!

'AT NIGHT I ALLOW MY PET THE MOON TO RUN FREELY INTO THE SKY MEADOW"
(from a poem from Hafiz)

Thank you for helping keep Albert's Dream Alive! ~ Helena :)

[PENS FOR PEACE /TJ CALI..]

SOUNDS LIKE GREAT LYRICS TO A VERY BEAUTIFUL SONG!
A FREE AND FEEL GOOD POEM!
WELL DONE MY FRIEND!
YOU ARE A BRILLIANT POET!
KEEP WRITING FROM YOUR SOUL,
FOR THE GOOD OF ALL SOULS!
TIM