Night and day

 

Night and day

By Ivonne L.

 

I think about you night, and day many times before. It’s not like me to pretend to hide my love away. I just can’t help it. I never felt my heart beat so intense before. 

 

I just can’t bear the pain no more. It’s killing me inside your always on my mind. I can’t explain why, I just can’t help it. It’s not like me to forgive, and forget. I don’t think I can’t handle the pain. I’ve fallen many many times before. 

 

I really don’t want to mess up, just like the so many times before. Since I think about you night, and day. I just can’t get you off my head your always there inside my head both night, and day. I just can’t seem to get you off my head.

 

I want you both night, and day. I promise I’ll never make you blue. Believe me when I say I’m true both night, and day. Just like I’m honest almost everyday, and yes I mean it when I say I love you both night, and day.

 

Reviews

[Beatrice Mars]

I really liked that. Good writing, intresting use of punctuation in places.

[Chamil3001]

Nice piece of writing..
interresting theme inside the poem packed.
what it lacks is the rhyming..
hope you don't mind when i say, i like to see poems with rhymes..

[Brianna Brie]

I like that it is heartfelt and honest. The title rocks!