The Night Watcher

Alone at night I hear nothing but a fearless whisper.

Tonight he is thirsty,

thirsty for my blood.

I am drawn to him and his cold-hearted soul.

He is drawn to the scent of my fresh throat.

I feel his cool breath blow down my neck,

where he is ready to seep his sharp pointy teeth.

Just one taste is all he wants.

The thought of his poisonous venom running through my veins,

leaves a frigid chill.

Yet I stand still, mesmerized by his presence.

My heart begins to beat faster,

his hiss becomes his charm.

He pulls me in quick,

while I hold my breath.

"Your innocence belongs to me now.."

His voice, which calls to me,

and speaks my name,

is now his sweet melody,

and immediately has me captivated.

He strokes his icy fingers slowly across my neck,

and leans in to kiss my throat.

I fear nothing and surrender…

Reviews

[J.Black]

Hello Amy!
Well I know EXACTLY what this poem is about, haha! No doubt.
Anyways, I must agree Edward Cullen is one good looking vampire.
I got so much visual, and emotion out of this. Almost like I was Bella, and I too was witnessing this.
This is about him right before he turns her into a vampire...
"I fear nothing and surrender"....

Im guessing your done breaking Dawn?
I almost awell! Keep it up love!

xx

[Cคɾเ&#..]

EDWARD CULLLLEN!!!!!!!!!!! UGH I WISH I WROTE THIS! lolz. I loved it, by all one of the best poems iv'e read. 100 points 4 u!

[Wildecat]

Amy I love these kind of stories. Always was a Vampire fan, Nice write.