Forbidden Love

Like a sacred fruit,

 

I am watching you,

longing for your taste,

dreaming of your sweet embrace.

But I can’t be with you,

I am forbidden.

 

Like the innate protection a mother has for her child,

 

I love you,

and no one can change that.

Deep inside my soul,

I am the only one that knows.

My heart aches,

you are my only escape.

 

Like blood that keeps the body alive,

 

finding the strength within me,

the need to survive,

I am forbidden,

to love you.

But it’s impossible to stop myself,

because I am already falling...

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Like a sacred fruit,
I am watching you,
longing for your taste,
dreaming of your sweet embrace.
But I can't be with you,
I am forbidden.
Like the innate protection a mother has for her child,
oh sweet words of love..it call for you to taste it
i know sometimes its bitter..but its always tempting
to taste again and again..
lovely write
wonderful..

[*Rain*]

"I am forbidden,

to love you.

But it's impossible to stop myself,

because I am already falling..."

I am all melty, because I KNOW exactly what you mean! I have so been there before, and it's a hard poetically gorgeous place to be. Best of luck, and keep up the amazing writing!

[Jessica]

I know how you feel. I'm a victim also. And it's hard.
Great write. I love it. =]
Keep writing!

[J.Black]

I am watching you,

longing for your taste,

dreaming of your sweet embrace.

But I can't be with you,

I am forbidden.


-- WOW! Opening paragraph started off with a bang and a huge temptation! Whoa.